Comic 4 - Glasgow Coma Scale

20th Jun 2016, 3:32 AM in Prelude
Glasgow Coma Scale
Average Rating: 5 (5 votes)
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NeilKapit 20th Jun 2016, 3:32 AM edit delete
NeilKapit
K.A. has been awakening in stages over the week, based on the Glasgow Coma Scale, in an attempt to infuse some credibility to this comic about kids in robot cat suits.

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Lostman 20th Jun 2016, 4:04 AM edit delete reply
Ain't this a kick in the head!
Lostman 20th Jun 2016, 4:04 AM edit delete reply
Ain't this a kick in the head!
Podgor 20th Jun 2016, 4:05 AM edit delete reply
Podgor
I like where this is going so far. It has a very strong X-Men/Doom Patrol vibe going on and I'm very interested in seeing how far you take the superheroic comparisons.

My only suggestion, and this might be down to personal taste, is finding a way to make the Is that aren't supposed to be capitalized sans serif. The lettering isn't bad as it is, and it really is a horribly small thing.
Hjels 20th Jun 2016, 4:55 AM edit delete reply
She seems to be on a healthy 14-15 now, though. SO I'm guessing we're looking at a framing device. Something bad done happened to the Wyrecats, and we're about to find out more about it. I always enjoy when fiction takes medical matters seriously. Too many treat the amount of time it takes the human body/what it is capable of recovering from too lightly, in my book. You're off to a good start.
SunScales 23rd Jun 2016, 4:01 AM edit delete reply
SunScales
Looking good, Neil. Happy to see this one's going to be in color! It goes a long way.
JWCraig 27th Jun 2016, 2:01 AM edit delete reply
JWCraig
Good start. I'm liking the concept. It does have a strong superhero vibe.
melaredblu 30th Jun 2016, 7:37 AM edit delete reply
melaredblu
I'm guessing this story will be told in anachronic order? That does seem to be your style, after all.
ProfEtheric 6th Jul 2016, 9:17 PM edit delete reply
ProfEtheric
Oooohh... Something tells me it's not necessarily the happiest story.
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